Analyzing previous papers

The Role of writing in political science
     Strengths

1. Introduction, started out very strong with an Interesting fact 
2. did well citing sources
3. explained academic writing well 

Weakness

1. I found the author using the wrong wording at times 
2. sometimes bounces around to much could flow better 
3. slow intro to non-academic writing 

Writing in Psychology 

     Strengths 

1.  Explained the job well 
2.  Did the interview 
3.   looks like citations were did properly 

Weakness 

1.  Slow start didn't make me want to read more 
2.  Didn't seem like it was written with full understanding
3.  Was too short and not many sources 

Writing as a creative writer 

    Strengths 

1.  Strong intro really brings the reader in 
2.  Eplains academic writing well 
3.   I liked the conclusion 

Weakness 

1. I feel like it was a little long 
2. Some of the paper felt like they could have gotten to the point quicker
3. didn't use quotations correctly when it came to grammar 

Writing in the field of Economics 

    Strengths 

1. Another strong start by asking a question  
2.  explained the writing style well 
3.   Correct APA

Weakness 

1. Couldn't tell they interviewed 
2.  I felt like the paper was really long 
3. thought they could be more creative with word choice 

The Role of writing in Engineering 

    Strengths 

1. I like starting papers with quotes 
2. interesting headers over each paragraph
3. Strong conclusion 

Weakness 

1. headers over paragraph also a negative because its harder to know what they are talking about 
2.  didn't capitalize all in text citations 
3. used acronyms and I couldn't find their meaning throughout the paper 

Writing in the Business Discipline

     Strengths 

1. strong introduction 
2.  interesting quotes 
3.  Strong ending to the paper 

Weakness 

1. interesting header choices 
2.  questionable use of facts 
3. not enough sources